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I'll keep this section short-ish, because you won't be able to learn how to write good copy in a short guide. If you already know it, you know it. If you don't, you will pay somebody else to do it for you in the future.
The thing to remeber is people don't owe you their attention. You need to provide value or they will leave. You usually have around 10 seconds to do that.
The good is news that writing well for the web is mostly about what you don't write.
Write like you talk to your best client
Think about the person who understood your product immediately. The one who signed up for the beta without asking 15 questions. The one who told a friend about it.
Then think about the client that was the toughes to convince and they weren't so willing to try, but then understood your value.
Whatever you write must be something you would say in a call with both of these people.
You would never say "our proprietary platform leverages advanced algorithms to optimize operational workflows." You'd say "you upload the file and it does everything automatically."
That's how you should write your website. If a sentence sounds like it could come from a corporate press release, delete it and try again.
A quick test: read your text out loud. If you stumble or feel weird saying it, it's not how you actually talk. Rewrite it until it sounds natural.
Cut everything you can cut
Go through every sentence you've written and ask: if I remove this word, does the meaning change? If the answer is no, remove it.
Before: "Our innovative solution effectively enables teams to manage their invoicing processes in a significantly more efficient manner through our intuitive interface and AI."
After: "Manage your team's invoices in half the time."
Same information. One third of the words.
Some easy cuts you can make right now on any text:
- "In order to" becomes "to"
- "Through the use of" becomes "with"
- "That allows you to" becomes just a verb
- "In an efficient manner" can usually be deleted entirely
- "Innovative" should always be deleted
If you find yourself adding adjectives to make something sound better, that's usually a sign that the underlying message isn't clear enough. A clear message doesn't need decoration.
Words that make people leave
There are words that instantly trigger the "this website says nothing" reflex in your visitor's brain. Every startup uses them. That's exactly why they don't work anymore.
"Innovative" - Every single startup calls itself innovative. The word has lost all meaning. If your product is actually innovative, show it. Don't tell people it's innovative.
"All-in-one" - When you say you do everything, people assume you do nothing well. It's much stronger to say you do one specific thing better than anyone else.
"Cutting-edge" / "State-of-the-art" - These are filler words. They take up space where a specific benefit should be. Replace them with what your product actually does.
"Seamless" - Every product claims to be seamless. No product is actually seamless. If your integration is easy, say "set up in 2 minutes" instead. That's specific and believable.
"Powerful" - Powerful compared to what? Show the power instead of claiming it. "Processes 10,000 transactions per second" is powerful.
"Revolutionary" - If it were revolutionary, you wouldn't need to say it.
If you catch yourself using any of these words, go back to the work you did in Step 1. Your target audience and their specific problem will give you much better words than these.
The heading/body structure
Here's a pattern that works really well for every section of your website and that helps you stay focused.
Your heading should state the benefit or the problem. Your body text should give the proof or the details.
Heading: Save 4 hours every month on subscription tracking
Body: CleanSave automatically scans all your accounts, flags inactive subscriptions, and sends you a monthly report. Your finance team reviews it in 5 minutes instead of spending an entire morning on it.
The heading is what people scan. Most visitors scroll and only read headings. If your headings tell a complete story by themselves, you've done a good job. Try this: read just the headings of your page from top to bottom. Does it make sense? Does it describe a clear progression from problem to solution? If yes, you're in good shape.
CTAs
We covered this briefly in Step 2, but it's worth going deeper because the CTA button is where all your writing work either pays off or doesn't.
The biggest mistake: vague CTAs. "Learn more", "Get started", "Discover". These tell the visitor nothing about what happens next, and uncertainty kills clicks.
Good CTAs describe what happens after the click:
- "Book a 15-min demo" tells you: it's a call, it's short, you'll see the product
- "Try free for 14 days, no card needed" tells you: it's free, there's no commitment, you can start now
- "See it in action (2 min video)" tells you: it's a video, it's short, you can watch right now
The best CTAs also remove a specific objection. "No credit card required" kills the "what if they charge me" fear. "Cancel anytime" kills the "what if I'm stuck" fear. "Takes 2 minutes to set up" kills the "I don't have time for this" fear.
Pick the one objection your audience is most likely to have and kill it right there in the CTA.
A note on tone
There's a big difference between sounding competent and sounding corporate.
Competent: "The system checks your bank feeds every 6 hours and flags suspicious charges. In our beta, it caught 94% of fraudulent payments within 24 hours."
Corporate: "Leveraging our proprietary AI-powered monitoring engine, we deliver a superior fraud detection experience that significantly reduces financial exposure across all payment verticals."
The first one makes you trust the product. The second one makes you close the tab.
Write like someone who knows their stuff and respects the reader's time. Short sentences. Clear ideas. Numbers when you have them. No smoke.